Feedback on
assignment
This assignment feedback is shorter due to be only
two images taken.
The idea is simple but effective to highlight two of
the keys buildings in Rome.
Cropping the buildings to show sections of them is
enough to communicate the idea.
The images have been taken in similar lighting
conditions so they do marry well together.
The selecting of the buildings could be better – particularly on the
Pantheon as it is a bit lumpy around the columns. Taking time to experiment with different
methods of making a selection in Photoshop can help you. A quick Google search will find lots of
various tutorials on this. There is no
one technique that works well in all situations. You haven’t detailed your selection methods
in the description.
You may like to go through and add some screen shots
that take you thorough the Photoshop process.
If you tried some methods that didn’t work you may like to briefly
outline and say what the problem was.
Learning Logs
or Blogs/Critical essays
The log was commented on in
the recently sent assignment 3 feedback.
Suggested
reading/viewing
Do
look for some examples of tourist brochures to include as research.
Pointers
for the next assignment
Assignment 5
Personal Project
This assignment does give you free reign to
demonstrate all that you have learnt so far.
However I think the key here is to keep the project focused rather than
trying to show all that you can do.
The hardest part is often the starting point. The theme should be personal to you, and be a
subject that you are interested in. This
will allow you to develop a range of ideas.
Also consider how accessible your idea is – can you reshoot – on any
project you should allow for several shoots in order for the images to evolve.
You may wish to email me an outline of your idea,
before you go too far. I think that
committing your brief to paper also helps focus the mind and the project!
Once you have some idea on your project please do get
in touch as I can then search suitable photographers as research.
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